Amidst their late-night conversations, he would often tell her the things that weren’t very good about her, the things she needed to change about herself, the things she needed to work on.
“Positive Criticism” were his words, he said.
And almost every time she believed in his words and questioned her eccentricity she felt she was drifting away from herself a bit more…
Decades later, being at the apotheosis of her life, she sits there alone beaming in her own bubble of serenity.
I look at her more amazed than ever… her long black hair now with visible hints of grey, her wide eyes now edged with the deep lines of happy crow’s feet accompanied with that hearty smile that never lost its grace… I can’t help but grin at what good age has done to her.
I look at her as she smirks at herself because now when she looks back to her young naive self she knows the only thing that was wrong with her was that,
“she believed the wrong person a little too easily….”.
I think many of us women can relate to your post. Thanks for sharing. I have a poetry blog here on WordPress and today’s poem is about embracing eccentricity in case you have time to read? Swiss greetings, Sam 🙂
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Thank you dear, I’ll definitely check it out😊
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Thank you
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Amazing! Absolutely absorbing and interesting. Loved this.
Ujala
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Thank you ujala dear, I am glad you loved it. 😊😊
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Short and swift really amazing. Am a new blogger too posting the first draft of my novella hoping for some feedback u can check it out at http://goodnessfiction.wordpress.com
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Thank you dear, I’d love to check out your blog. And best wishes for your new blog, happy blogging. 😊😊
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Short and Sweet amazing 👌
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Thank you 😊😊💜
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Great post, just followed your blog. Please do check out my blog as well 🙂
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Thank you dear, I’d love to read from you dear. 😊😊
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“she believed the wrong person a little too easily….”.
We allow ourselves to be too easily swayed by the opinions of those who matter to us. The key to discovering your own self-satisfaction is to ignore negative voices in your life and opening your heart and mind to the unending possibilities that you bring to the table.
Thank you so much for sharing! 😇
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Awee! I should rather thank you for this wonderful review. Thank you so much dear 😊😊💜
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You’ve created a great image 😀
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Thank you dear😊
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What beautiful style of writing.
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Thank you so much hun. 😊😊
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Love this – great writing
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This is absolutely brilliant!!! I’ve been there too. Well written.
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I’ve been there too dear and it took me a lot to get out of it. But it taught me never to doubt myself and I’ll always be grateful for that lesson.
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That is so true. These lessons stay with us forever!
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I like 👍. Kudos
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Thank you chum 💜
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You’re most welcome..
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